9/17/09


BABALA!!!! Isang napakahabang kwento pero if wala kayong magawa sige lang basa lang kayo... Trip ko lang gumawa ng story kaya heto... hahahaha(Ang tumawa gigilitan ko ng leeg at di ko bati) Parang bata lang ah... hahahahahaha



I felt the soft breeze as I was leaning against the trunk. The birds were singing, soothing my aching soul.

Its peaceful here… too peaceful.

Four? No five. Every day, as I sat under the tree, I saw five people passing this area. Mang KOSA was always one of those five people. Every afternoon, he passed this place where I was, carrying his tools: his shovel, his sprinkler and plastic gloves.
I straightened up to greet him with a warm smile. He just looked ahead to where he was going, not paying any attention to me. I figured he didn’t notice me.

For so many years now, it had always been this way, everyday… I would never leave this place. This small place I called sanctuary. My home where I waited for the realization of one promise;


“I promise I’d be back.”

The moment I met you, I knew I found the perfect girl; but not at the perfect time. You made me happy in a way that no one else could.
So many things to be done…so many obstacles to overcome. So with an aching heart, I did something I knew I would never regret.

“I promise I’d wait.” My heart, my love, my life… we needed to wait for the right time. As to what time it would be… no one could ever tell…
That solemn promise; it was a promise between two lovers. A promise we had sworn not to break. Not much was spoken after those words had been given, for we both knew how much we meant each word.

And so I waited…
I waited until a month was over…
I waited until almost a year had passed…
I waited for another couple of years…
I waited and waited…

But it didn’t even scare me one bit when you failed to come each day. Yes, I felt pain… Severe pain knowing that I had to spend another day without you by my side. The pain almost killed me, wasn’t it ironic?
Everyday, I was lost.

Everyday, the pain would slowly kill me.
There’s just one promise that kept me alive. Loving is waiting. And I didn’t understand that ‘till I met you.
I was lost on my thoughts that I didn’t notice that a car had already parked beside the road. A pretty girl in her twenties came out. Her eye, they were too familiar; TOO FAMILIAR. One look and my knees begun to shake, my hands trembled.
She’s BACK!

How lonely her eyes had become. She started to quicken her pace towards me and stopped a few feet away. Her eyes mirrored such agony as she looked up to the heavens and kneeled. She bowed her head until it almost touch the ground. She was sobbing as she hugged herself.

“I told you I’d be back didn’t I!”
She shouted.

Pain filled her voice and almost in a whisper, she added, “You told me you’d wait… but you didn’t.” She was sobbing so hard. I could do nothing but to sigh.
I went beside her, my face inches away from her face. I looked at her and went closer, my lips close to her ears. “But I did wait. I’m still here waiting for you. I have never doubted you and your love. Thank you for coming back… I LOVE YOU.”
Her eyes widened. I knew she felt my cold cheek when she touched her cheek with her hands.

“I’m still going to wait for you… up there.” I stood up. “You made me happy, you always do.”

A light enveloped me; I gave you one last look and I saw you standing over my grave as you wiped your tears.

I still knew that you’re my soul mate. I just knew it. Fate might have been succeeded in parting our ways… but it never succeeded in stopping my love for you.
I knew that fate couldn’t stop me… for 5 years I had waited for you, and forever, I will wait for you until “our time” comes… The right time.


* P.S

Kapag may tyaga... may nilaga
Kami na ulit!!!

25 comments:

MarcoPaolo said...

yehey... kau na ulit :)

September 17, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Basyon said...

Napaka-drama moh tlga hahaha. Ang cheesssyyy ng kwento. In fairness, kakaiyak ah. Pero congrats! Kau na ulit! ;D I told you fren, magiging ok din hehe.

April
Stories from a Teenage Mom
Mom on the Run
Chronicles of a Hermit

September 17, 2009 at 4:52 PM
JETTRO said...

congratz parekoy kayo na uli
bagay nman kayo eh
imbitado ako parekoy hehe

September 17, 2009 at 4:55 PM
saul krisna said...

@parekoy marco
hahaha yehey talaga!!!!
next time ko na ikukwento sa iyo kung panu kami naging kami ulit....
salamat sa pag bati

@mommy basyon
sira ka talaga... yung kwento na yan ginawa ko for her... hahahahaha cheeeeessssyyyy ba? di naman masyado... slight lang.... kami na ulit YEHEY!!!!

September 17, 2009 at 5:43 PM
saul krisna said...

@parekoy jettro
teka imbitado saan? hahahahaha kasal? sira!!!! pero sanan kami na.... salamat sa pag dalaw parekoy

September 17, 2009 at 5:44 PM
kox said...

ang ganda ng kwento.. grabe! nice kuya! hehehe..


YEHEY!!! kayo n uli. congrats :D

September 17, 2009 at 7:08 PM

..♥ hon.. nice story.. gling gling mo tlaga :))

happy tlga ako super dahil tau na uet.. mahal na mahal pa rin lita..salamat sa time sa effort sa love sa care..sa lahat..lalo na sa patience dahil hinintay mo ako..thankful tlaga ako 4 having you as my partner again.. na miss po kita sobra..

♥ i love you soo much honey qu...mwuapx,, :*

September 17, 2009 at 10:08 PM
Becs said...

napaka KESO! woohh :)) congrats ulit xD me is happy for you <3

September 17, 2009 at 11:27 PM
Kosa said...

teka, babalik ako..lols

napadaan lang.

September 18, 2009 at 3:07 AM
Kosa said...

huh?
talagang may ganung factor pa ahhh!
salamat sa pagpapasikat ulit sa akin..lols lagi nalang akong nagkakautang sayo. hahaha

seriously***

sa totoo lang parekoy, parang may kumakausap sa aking sa kwento mo. para kaseng "what a coinsidence..." soooobrang nakarelate ako sa kwento mo.

sa mga tauhan ng kwento,
darating din ang TAMANG ORAS.
darating din ang TAMANG PANAHON.
mga bata pa sila.

hahaha

September 18, 2009 at 9:48 AM
Jepoy said...

Hindi ko binasa sa office ang blog mo dito ko sa bahay binasa para felt na felt. Ang keso keso kasi punong punong ng enden cheese at chizwhiz. Anyways, serious mode *Insert transformation here* I feel numb waiting. Waiting keeps my body numb. Until I forget how to differentiate pain and happiness. But still, I choose to wait.Echos!

September 18, 2009 at 10:59 AM
Summer said...

Wow! Congrats for having her back in your arms. =D You are so lucky to have a girl that loves you so much. Congrats!

Summer
A Writers Den
Brown Mestizo

September 18, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Solo said...

Woohoo. Ashtig! Kau na pala ulit. So la ng dahilan para mag-moment hahaha. Conrats!

Solo
Travel and Living
Job Hunt Pinoy

September 18, 2009 at 3:29 PM
saul krisna said...

@sis kox
naks naman... nagustuhan mo pala ang kwento ko... oo kami na ulit at sobrang happy na ako... uy salamat nga pala sa pag babasa huh... hirap pa iksiin yung kwento kaya mahaba eh... hahahahaha

@para sa gf ko
hahaha touch naman ako sa sinabi mo... love you sooooo much too.... salamat sa love talaga.... ingat ka honey... mwaaah

September 18, 2009 at 6:41 PM
saul krisna said...

@becs
hahaha takte bakit lahat ng nag comment ay puro keso ang sinasabi? hahahahaha

@kosa
hoy kosa anu yung sinasabi mong kumakausap sa iyo sa kwento ko.... tinamaan ka noh? hahaha teka SHARE MO NAMAN!!!!!

dami mo ng utang sa akin kosa....

September 18, 2009 at 6:45 PM
saul krisna said...

@jepoy
hahaha anak ka ng jueteng parekoy... may hinihintay ka din pala... sino siya? uy uy uy aminin.... hahahaha teka may love life ka ba?

@pareng solo
syempre lucky ako.... pero thankful din ako kay BRO kasi ibinalik niya si gf....

September 18, 2009 at 6:47 PM
saul krisna said...

@solo

yup wala ng dahilan para mag moment pa ako... hahahaha thanks solo...

September 18, 2009 at 6:48 PM
♥superjaid♥ said...

congrats kuya saul!buti naman at nagkabalikan na kayo, im so happy for you..and for the story, ang masasabi ko lang eh napakakeso talaga!Ü haha

September 18, 2009 at 9:38 PM
Rej said...

Jack ikaw ba yan?

In fairness, ang lufet nun! Kudos!

Napadaan lang po. Happy weekend :)

September 18, 2009 at 11:01 PM
Kosa said...

haha.
hayaan mo na yun!
ang gusto kong malaman eh kung saan mo nakuha yung kwentong ito?
base ba to sa teleserye ng 'yong totoong buhay? may nagshare sayo?
ohh ano...

pahabol
tanggalin mo yung address na MANG sa aking pangalan! MASMATANDA KA sa akin loko..lolz

September 19, 2009 at 12:51 AM
saul krisna said...

@sis jaid
naku isa ka pa...puro keso na lang ang sinabi mo... hahahahahaha...yup okay na kami at mukhang mas mas sweet na siya sa akin kaysa before....okay na okay na talaga kami...

@rej
sinong jack?yung sa titanic? hahahaha sira hindi noh?di ko pa nga natatapos ang titanic kasi super haba eh... anyway salamat sa pag dalaw bro

September 19, 2009 at 6:10 PM
saul krisna said...

@snappy sorrow
hmmm ayus sa name ah... parang may something sa name mo...anyway thanks sapag bati.... salamat din sapag dalaw ate... tekasino ba mas matanda sa atin?

@parekoy kosa

bout sa story ko.... both ang sagot ko... base sa storya ng buhay ko at may nag bigay ng idea sa akin...

trademark ko kasi yung pag gawa ng mga love story na namamatay ang bida... at bout sa waiting thingy... talagang nag hihintay ako dati sa ex gf ko now gf na...

gusto ko lang kasi ipakita sa kanya na kahit abutin ako ng ilang taon sa paghihintay eh gagawin ko.... kaya nga pinatay ko ang sarili ko sa storya para mas astig...ewan ko ba kung bakit trip na trip kong pinapatay ang bida sa mga story ko....

TEKA.... share mo naman yung sinasabi mo sa comment mo na parang may nangungusap sastory ko sa iyo...DALIAN MO NA!!!!!!!!!!

September 19, 2009 at 6:15 PM
kheed said...

woot woot! ang cheesy uh..

sabi na nga ba at kayo naman talaga ang para sa isat isa.. congrats!

ingat lagi..

September 20, 2009 at 10:57 PM
Kosa said...

hahaha.

wateber parekoy!

kalimutan mo na nga to!lolz

September 21, 2009 at 12:21 PM
 


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